I did not recieve much feedback on my title page, it was pretty much all finished, the only thing people thought i could do was move around my subtitles so that they could be seen better, but when i went to edit the places that they are in now are the best location. so i did not change many things on the title at all.
Toc- this was my biggest edit overall for my third quarter submissions and i did not receive any feedback other than what Mr. Elsbree said about my location of my articles, he thought that i should move my article page numbers so that they would have sections like pages 2-30 would be for food and 21-50 would be for home and the rest for garden, but i likes having them all integrated because it made it feel like one big magazine not like 3 separate ones. so i left it the way it was.
2 page article-
this i did not have man edits to either, after my 3rd quarter submission was sent in i did not receive any major changes to make to my magazine before my final submission so i left this pretty much the way it was.
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