I have received feedback from when i presented to the class, and there are a few things i plan on changing based on what people mentioned including my title page some fog he words cant be easily read so I'm going to move the words around and maybe change some of the fonts. Overall i might try to get a new picture because it is hard to find room for all of the words. Also students mentioned that my table of contents is a little plain and i want to create a background photo and take away the small ones or leave them and at least make it a little more appealing because right now it is just a white background and I want it to stand out more. For my article I want to be able to create a dominant photo so i might need to take out some information in my article that i might not need so that i will have room to enlarge a photo. On the second page i might schedule another interview to get some other questions in because i feel like there were some other things i could have asked her. Overall the class thought it was pretty good its just a few things they suggested i could make changes to, but the interview and dominant photo is things i thought about on my own on how i could improve my magazine.
